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Post by Soulcatcher4 on Oct 28, 2004 18:28:13 GMT -5
I wrote this poem and then showed it to my friend. He asked me if I was going to commit suicide. I said no and asked why. The poem was originally about repenting one's sins and starting over. It can also be taken as suicide though
Lost in the darkness not a glimmer of light I'm stumbling upon myself since there's nothing in sight feeling my way through down the long corridor Time to break free I need something more I'm at the end nothing can stop me from escaping my plight Here I go Jump feet first into the light I have repented I have escaped the wrong My horrible life has turned into a beatiful song
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Post by Aiden on Oct 28, 2004 22:48:57 GMT -5
oooooooo I like this one. that's cool how it can have 2 different meanings.
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Post by Fea on Nov 14, 2004 8:21:50 GMT -5
aaaawwwww this one is really touching
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