Creation

[Ape]

A universe of impossible measurements
infinite density and improbable sizes
of negative spaces and mysterious existences
undeterminable by theoretical sciences

and life

How did we get here, who is the creator
is it a god, single or multiple
alien beings who cloned and created?
duplicated perfectly and slightly mutated?

Existence is beyound our comprehension
we grasp at straws for an explanation
we created the gods to create ourselves
theology is useless

The Creators do not 'exist'
at least not by our terminology
they live in a realm of nonexistence
with ethereal hands they constructed reality

We are an unintelligent subject
created for obvservation and learning
the raithar created creation and time
from empty voids and ethereal slime

They watch us from within their realm
every 'second' of every 'day'
they are intrigued by our evolution
society, class, and the emotions we've developed

They touch us and we contract unreasonable diseases
doctors and scientists cannot understand
they take life randomly and breathe life into dead lungs
and songs of miracles or curses are sung

They are intrigued with their expirement
they watch us laugh, shower, fuck
but they are not interested in human flesh
they are above our pathetic desires

There is much they themselves cannot understand
they are all-knowing, yet much eludes their comprehension
theft, murder, jelousy, and other such crimes
are submitted with confusion to the Eldar Primes

The Eldar Primes examine the weakness
but do not allow the raithar to understand
they know the raithar's race is doomed
to sick and weak to take care of themselves

Still the raithar are proud to have produced such loyal subjects
but they have left detectable traces of themselves within our world
this has led to complications that must be resolved
and they fear soon they themselves must be involved

for recently the raithar are frenzied
we've created EVP software and EMF meters
they know their traces are coming uncovered
though we are confused about what we've discovered

They are amused, our own post-death creations
heaven, jesus, is hindering our progress
we think these to be ghosts, spirits, once alive
our own stupidity allows us to survive...for now

but each step closer we get to the answers
is another step towards our extinction
the explantion must always remain hidden
knowing the answers has long been forbidden

The Eldar Primes are dissapointed
they predict the conclusion is near
we have no choice but to accept this

[piñata]

Interesting take on things. I kind of like it.

[Ape]

I hate it actually. I intended it to not flow properly. It orignally had all sorts of weird time issues, extremely different line lengths, and even had sections with 2 or 3 lines and sometimes 5. But it read like crap, so I changed it, and I still hate it. But I got tired of messing with it, and figured if I posted it I wouldn't attempt to edit it anymore. =P
I actually have a TON of these (about the Eldar Primes, the ethereal, one about afterlife, and various other things) but I hate them all.

[piñata]

That's because you're your own worst critic.

[Predator-Fan]

Thats true. what everyone likes, the original author hates. I'm the same way. In a sense it had a kind of greek look on it, like in the Illiad. They don't know who or what they had to worship, though all the major gods were mentioned.

[Ape]

Possibly, but there is nothing anyone can say to convince me this poem was worth spending my time on. I don't even know why I wrote it...clearly it was divinely written. Accept it as truth! And send me your money to support the cause!! 0.0

[Predator-Fan]

I am not so sure on that. sorry no money coming out of my pockets. but i still like the poem

[piñata]

The only gods I believe in are the ones I make up.

[Predator-Fan]

Yay you