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Rowboat
Oct 16, 2004 18:45:42 GMT -5
Post by Ape on Oct 16, 2004 18:45:42 GMT -5
The sea swirls seemingly endlessly the edge of Earth seems so far away the sun sets in both the sky and sea and so sets a beautiful day The boat, one with the changing waters The boat and waves dancing together mid-year blooms and life's so much hotter the partnership pays no heed to weather At night, the stars seem to light up the sky each so small, useless, or so it seems united the darkness and lights form a tie doesn't anyone wonder what this means Lights now dim, black turns to grey the sun awakes as the moons sets fresh and ready to brighten another day one shining as the other one rests looking arround, i realize i am alone feelings of dread, i'm seeing no shore nothing left to do but dream of my home drifting aimlessly, i've forgoten my oar The ending blows, i think i'll rewrite it tomarrow
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Rowboat
Oct 17, 2004 14:02:29 GMT -5
Post by Aiden on Oct 17, 2004 14:02:29 GMT -5
hmmmm.... I like it. It reminds me of that movie, Castaway, or whatever its called.
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