God of war

[Ape]

Bow down to the mighty
be good and help the poor
but when you're losing battle
you praise your god of war

Your god loves everyone
your god is so peaceful
but once you've waged war
you pray he burns the other steeple

But now that you're losing
where is your god now?
maybe he'll forgive you
just go and bow

but then you turn arround
and you wage war once again
kill a man, then pray to your god
pretend you didn't sin

Your god of war is failing
all of your friends are slain
now you can go and praise your god
thank him for your pain



Yea, just wrote that off the top of my head. I actually created this thread before i had it written...and just...started typing. I have some more points to make, maybe i'll do it later

[piñata]

It's really good. Is it about Iraq?

[Ape]

I guess you could say that. But really its about war in general. I just think its funny how soldiers can sit there and pray to God or whatever during peaceful times...and talk about how bad sin is...then get into a war and go on a killing spree.

I'm not a religious person...at all...it just doesn't make much since to me.

[Aiden]

wow! that's all I have to say. Just wow.

[piñata]

I'm with you, Aiden. I'll never understand how someone who doubts their intelligence as much as Ape does sometimes can be so deep.

[Aiden]

No kidding. I mean really, these are awesome

[Ape]

piñata said:

I'm with you, Aiden. I'll never understand how someone who doubts their intelligence as much as Ape does sometimes can be so deep.

Meh, i'm trying to write stuff that doesn't have to do with my depression...crap.

[Aiden]

Well that's good. Cuz sometimes if that's all you write about, it just gets worse, so its good to expand out on different subjects. (at least that's what my teachers tell me lol)

[piñata]

ApeKiller said:

Meh, i'm trying to write stuff that doesn't have to do with my depression...crap.

Well, you're doing a hell of a job. I look forward to seeing what you'll write about next.