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Oct 19, 2004 11:42:05 GMT -5
Post by Aiden on Oct 19, 2004 11:42:05 GMT -5
I just wrote this, like, a second ago. My friend says its cool, so I wanted to see what you guys thought of it.
No one’s here
I’m all alone
I fight myself
I have no home
No one cares
I’m on my own
I have no rights
My seeds pre-sewn
Don’t leave me here
It cannot be
When all I feel
Is just empty
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Oct 21, 2004 18:03:35 GMT -5
Post by Ape on Oct 21, 2004 18:03:35 GMT -5
I like it  Really sounds like something i'd write o.0 0.o |
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Oct 22, 2004 15:47:51 GMT -5
Post by Aiden on Oct 22, 2004 15:47:51 GMT -5
lol, thanks. I think I have a grand way of copying other people, cuz I noticed that mine are a lot like yours.
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Oct 24, 2004 6:24:36 GMT -5
Post by Ape on Oct 24, 2004 6:24:36 GMT -5
Nah. It seems like alot of people write like you or me...which is why whenever somone talks about how great my stuff is i just disagree  |
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Oct 24, 2004 13:21:47 GMT -5
Post by Aiden on Oct 24, 2004 13:21:47 GMT -5
why do you disagree? Cuz your stuff is really good!
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Oct 24, 2004 13:29:11 GMT -5
Post by Ape on Oct 24, 2004 13:29:11 GMT -5
Meh, it just seems like so many other people write exactly like me (or i write exactly like alot of people) so i don't see how its so...great... |
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Oct 24, 2004 13:35:19 GMT -5
Post by Aiden on Oct 24, 2004 13:35:19 GMT -5
true. and I've noticed about myself, and just about everyone else, that no one thinks that their own stuff is good.
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Oct 24, 2004 18:21:37 GMT -5
Post by piñata on Oct 24, 2004 18:21:37 GMT -5
A wise woman once told me, "You are your own worst critic." She's a published (but not famous) writer, so she'd know. I'm still trying to get her to come here.  Anyway, just because other people do stuff that's similar to yours doesn't mean you don't do it better. That goes for both Ape and Aiden. |
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Oct 27, 2004 10:23:09 GMT -5
Post by Aiden on Oct 27, 2004 10:23:09 GMT -5
Aw, thanks Pinata  I still don't think I'm all that good though... |
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I still don't think I'm all that good though...