Song of Myself

[Aiden]

Wow, this one was spontaneous.

I see the sun
And think of all
The fun we had together.

I hear the sea
And pretend I’m back
And you are there with me.

I feel the wind
And touch the ground
Just wishing for my friend.

I think of all
The good times gone
Then tremble and I fall.

I am the one
Just left behind
Forgotten and undone.

Don’t grieve for me
I’ll be alright
I’m just a memory.

It took me maybe, 1 minute to think it up, cuz I just make them up as I go. I'm on a role guys! hahaha.... but now I'm done with all my poems for class, so I don't know if I'll be writing a whole bunch after this.

[piñata]

This one is good.

I know what you mean about being on a roll... it seems like there are one-week or one-month periods where I write a whole bunch of stuff, and then it just... stops. Hopefully you have some more left in you, though, because you're getting better at it, and you were pretty good to begin with.

[Aiden]

lol, it mostly depends on my mood. If I'm having a really bad day, then all my poems just suck. But today is obviously not a bad day haha

[piñata]

That's exactly the opposite of me... I'm better at poetry when I'm depressed or pissed off.

[Ape]

Shibby

I can write at pretty much anytime...but it doesn't matter because all i can seem to get is crap. But anywho, it all comes easier when i'm pissed off or depressed, like Pinata said.

I think you should keep writing, i like it. And Pinata, you should post some stuff too:D I'm tired of being alone in these poetry boards

[piñata]

I'll try and dig up some of my old stuff from EM until I can think of something new.

[Aiden]

Yeah, depressed is my mode too. Or I just have to think of something depressing, then it all just comes spilling out.