Coming Anew

[Soulcatcher4]

I reread this poem and loved it ;D (except for the last line)



What is this chill
Creeping down my spine (cliche... go figure)
It pains me so
along the life line
Something new
is coming my way
and I have a feeling
it's here to stay
Is it good?
Or is it bad?
Will it make me smile?
Or make me mad?
Only one way
to find out
Embrace it
Let it shout
Will it destroy me?
Will I be reborn?
Only one way to find out
Let it scorn

[Aiden]

I like the last line. It gives it a....intense feeling.

[piñata]

Yeah, besides, there are worse things you could've used to rhyme there... like "corn". That would've made absolutely NO sense. ;D

[Ape]

Or..."porn"

[Aiden]

lol, you dirty people. He could have used 'mourne' too.