Kait
Acolyte
"Though you're still with me, I've been alone all along..."
Posts: 28
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Post by Kait on Nov 6, 2004 18:14:34 GMT -5
Sit still, my child, and let me sing Of dragons, fairies, knights, and kings Of maidens fair and love so strong Of far off worlds where nothing's wrong. Now concentrate and close your eyes, And drift to lands where you can fly. Slide down rainbows and ride the wind, And find the weak you can defend. Should fell beasts come and monsters call, Don't you run; stand strong and tall. Slay the brutes, and when you're done, The crowds will cheer and start the fun. Bask in glory at a victory dance Where pixies twirl and satyrs prance. Find true love and save the day. Adventure is only a thought away. Now open your eyes and look at me; Make a promise that sets you free. Even when you're old and gray, Don't let the magic fade away.
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Post by piñata on Nov 6, 2004 18:17:39 GMT -5
Wow. That is one seriously awesome poem. *wishes he could write like that *
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Post by Ape on Nov 7, 2004 19:49:53 GMT -5
I agree with Pinata
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Kait
Acolyte
"Though you're still with me, I've been alone all along..."
Posts: 28
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Post by Kait on Nov 7, 2004 20:29:35 GMT -5
Thanks, guys. ;D I think it's probably my best yet so I'm pretty proud of it. Trust me, I don't normally write very good poetry.
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Post by Aiden on Nov 12, 2004 12:49:05 GMT -5
this ones cool, I seem to say that for every poem on here, but still, very good
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Post by Fea on Nov 14, 2004 8:12:57 GMT -5
WOW this poem is great i love the way you created another world where magick reigns
*claps*
Well done
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