Your Loss

[Fea]

The silence was broken
As the mass bells signled surrender
And it was known to all
All was lost
She was...Dead

Her crimson oceans spilt
In privet wars forght and lost

He came to us
In painfull sadness he spoke
With hevey hearts and wounded souls
We listoned
"We did all we could"

And then is started
Cards and flowers
More death
With empty words and fake condolences
They seak involvment and say
"We heard about your loss."

[Aiden]

hmmm... I like it, but the end just kind of leaves ya hangin and waiting for more

[Ape]

I liked the ending

[Aiden]

lol, must be just me then