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Post by Fea on Nov 14, 2004 8:48:44 GMT -5
My baby died inside me When my heart broke As my womb cried crimson tears oof sadness Where did my baby go Did she know my pain
Why do you call me mother How can that be When i killed my only child As she slept softly at my core
Did i smother her Smother her with the great expectations of the life she would lead All she would succeed
Will we meet again?
What more can i say but I failed you child As a woman I failed As you mother I failed you I let you down I let you die...
Dedicated to Sarah, my little princess.
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Post by Aiden on Nov 14, 2004 14:51:58 GMT -5
oh that's sad, its a good poem though.
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Post by piñata on Nov 14, 2004 15:08:04 GMT -5
Yes, very touching. I like how you don't bother with rhyming in your poetry, Fea... it makes for a very unconventional and truly unique style.
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Post by Ape on Nov 14, 2004 15:12:16 GMT -5
Heh, yea, i really like that. I've tried it...but...i can't do it right. -_-
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Post by piñata on Nov 14, 2004 15:21:58 GMT -5
You shouldn't worry about changing your style anyway, Ape. No reason to fix something that's not broken.
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