~*Images*~

[Lady Enelya]

A swirl of dazzling colours,
Bright, vibrant, striking,
Sharp and contrasting,
Strong and brilliant.

A haze of rainbow hue,
Serine, calm, sleepy,
Warm and inviting,
Placid and brilliant.

A whirl of dappled shade,
Dark, brooding, silent,
Dim and murky,
Nightmarish and brilliant.

A fog of mottled blush,
Frail, pale, and delicate,
Fair and graceful,
Tantalizing and brilliant

this one really does suck but I'm working on it.

[piñata]

No it doesn't suck.

I could tell you weren't finished with it yet, but it definitely has promise. I like the use of imagery.

[Ape]

I also like the imagery... i guess thats why its called Images

;D

[piñata]

I guess that's why you were the first person I chose to mod this forum... because you pick up on that kind of stuff.

[Lady Enelya]

Well the thing is there are too many sesura in it. You kinda loose the flow esp in the last stanza it dosn't sound soft but sharp cus there are too many. grrr should have fixed that before posting, but since I'm re-vamping the whole thing I'll fix it then.

[piñata]

I look forward to seeing the finished product.