Moon days.

[Fea]

Moon days are red
with my thoughts of you.
Trouble some times
hold no pretty view.
Words you have said
leave a perminant bruise
Good meomorys flee
I've only bad ones to see.
Sleep never comes easy
but soon it will come.
when i do wake up
I'll wake up to war.
Another day over
Another day done
Tomorrow I'll face you.
And not even angels will stop me.

[piñata]

Hmm... very strong poem... what's it about exactly, though? I get the impression it's about a confrontation of some sort, but I was wondering if it was something more specific you were trying to get at.

Anyway, it's still good.

[Fea]

Its kind of a story about when i fell out with some one who i thought was a good freind but she wasn't really. It happened on a monday (moonday)
It also about how i feel uneasy when theres trouble between my friends and how i never hold back and can sometimes go too far. Thers other points in there but i'm guessing you've picked up on them. I'm glad you like it ;D

[piñata]

Thanks. I just reread it, and I like it even more now that I know all that background information.