Torment of an angonised bystander

[Phoebe]

Tears run down your face
I watch from far away
Wish i could take your place
And ease your pain today

You let out an absent cry
As the public pass you by
I try to push through
To come and help you

But people are in my way...

I wish i could help you
But the crowds won't help me through
I have to stand by
And watch your agonising bystander.

Please please please comment on my poems, these are my first ever poems and i'd really like to know what you all think(EVEN YOU.FEA)

[piñata]

I like this one, I can identify with it because I've been there.

You've really never written poetry before the stuff you've posted here? Wow. You're already better than me.