Post by styx on Mar 3, 2005 5:02:00 GMT -5
*i'm crap @ poetry just gi us a comment*
Death only comes to those who wait,
Percieve aspire to see the pearly gate,
I don't care if you think i'm twisted,
Hells fire has left me blistered,
So yeah i'm feeling hurt and down,
But seriously you wont see me frown,
You know i wont show if im upset
I push it back and try to forget
You'll never see the black inside
Believe me I've got too much pride...
Death only comes to those who wait,
Percieve aspire to see the pearly gate,
I don't care if you think i'm twisted,
Hells fire has left me blistered,
So yeah i'm feeling hurt and down,
But seriously you wont see me frown,
You know i wont show if im upset
I push it back and try to forget
You'll never see the black inside
Believe me I've got too much pride...
As long as what you write comes from the heart, it's still good.