Nightshadow's Poetry

[nightshadow]

Forever

Forever, eternity, for all time.

I'll only keep it as all mine.

Helpless, hapless, poor lost soul.

For all the weight takes its toll.

Burden, pain, all the despair.

But still I will always care.

Sadness, happiness, mix it all.

Thoughts of joy keep away my fall.

Tourment, hatred, feed my fire.

Burning passions for deep desires.

Betrayal, lust, a broken heart.

I died for love's deadly art.

Only one for now. I want to see what you guys think.

[AnimaStone]

Not bad. Has room for improvement, but a very good start.

[Predator-Fan]

Nice

[piñata]

That's really good. I wish I had seen it earlier, but somehow this thread escaped my notice until now.

[Predator-Fan]

Oh.... is it because you didn't feel like lokking at it, hmmmmm?

[nightshadow]

Because of you

“Why do you love me?” she asked one day,
“Because of your great beauty,’ was all I could say.
“You are lovely on the inside and out,
You carry away my fears and doubt.”
The same question I asked with a sigh,
“Because of you,” was her only reply.
I was confused but my heart was content,
And together the afternoon we spent.
Later that nite I called her at home,
I was feeling sad and very alone.
She answered and told me of a pain,
I asked her what was to be blamed.
“Because of you,” was her only reply,
I could only hope that she had lied.
The next day they found her dead,
A bullet wound into her head.
They found a note that made me cry,
“Because of you,” was her only reply.
I called her mom and did inquire,
Why had the deadly shot been fired?
“Your love for her was so very deep,
Her own love could not compete.
The more you loved, and the more you cared,
Finally set her into deep despair.
You loved her too much and that is why,
“Because of you,” was her final reply.”

[AnimaStone]

Wow... that was good.

[piñata]

Damn! You just owned anything I'm capable of writing.

You need to stop making me cry, though.