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Post by Ape on Apr 18, 2007 13:28:58 GMT -5
I wrote this a few weeks ago. And then i found it about half an hour ago, but i didn't like it at all. So i re-wrote it. Ended up completely different than the original, but same idea. When the heavy sky is falling and Satan's cries are calling Like a banshee ever beckoning to heed the demons reckoning I'll come for you. When the tornadoes start to spin like the thoughts you breathe within causing storms to roar like firestorms instructing minds to rip like briar swarms I'll come for you When the volcanoes start to burst earths molten innards are dispersed to rid itself of parasites causing all its insects to ignite I'll burn with you When the demons leave their fire pits to consume your soul in tiny bits your screams will be unheard by all only i will hear your call And i'll come for you I'll always be there when you are in danger... ...when your world is ever burning when you've emotionally struck yourself but until your world stops turning you can fuck yourself
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Post by piñata on Apr 19, 2007 10:15:17 GMT -5
That'd actually make a good metal song. You're actually getting better at writing, too... you're just too hard on yourself.
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Post by Ape on Apr 19, 2007 13:34:45 GMT -5
That'd actually make a good metal song. Maybe its a sign that i'm spending to much money on it. =P
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